READERS' AND TEACHERS' GUIDE TO 
THE ESSENTIAL BIRD

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Copyright © Carmel Bird 2005.
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A GUIDE

FOR READERS/\TEACHERS/\STUDENTS

OF

~~THE ESSENTIAL BIRD~~

In Consultation With the Author

 A Note About this Collection of forty-five short stories

 The Essential Bird  is the result of the author’s reflection on and reaction to the experience of life in Australia across  the second half of the twentieth century and beyond. Taking the extraordinarily versatile medium of the short story, Carmel Bird enters the minds and moods of the child, the woman, the man, the couple, the family in a range of situations, many of which have been inspired by real events, others of which speculate on a world as it might be constructed in a not-too-distant future. These narratives look with a kind of innocent compassion and wonder on the behaviours and destinies of fallible human beings in a world that is forever moving into an unknown and often frightening future. They also offer a deep acknowledgement of the importance of the natural world in all its strangeness and beauty, contextualising many of the follies of human beings within the fabric of nature. Above all the stories enter the psychology – not only of the characters involved – but also of the society in which the events take place. This ability to construct the mood of the society at the same time as it creates the vivid charaters who function (or mal-function) within it, is a particular quality of Carmel Bird’s fiction. The anxieties oof the characters and the society are examined, and even in some of the darkest stories there can be found a glimmer, a shimmer of something good, beautiful and hopeful. This selection of stories has been chosen in order to showcase the very essence of the short fiction of this highly entertaining and yet deeply serious writer.

 

The chart in Section One analyses the individual stories for their themes and subject matter, illustrating how densely woven the collection is. These are stories readers will wish to return to over and over again as the meanings are layered and often subtle, and lead on to sudden moments of understanding and revelatoin which readers will welcome often as personal epiphanies. They are stories which can, if you let them, challenge the way you think about things. They also lend themselves to being read aloud, to being performed for an audience. 

 

In Section Two the stories are examined for some of the ways in which their elements function, and for some of the ways they can inspire students of writing to move from the challenge and stimulation of the text to the creation of their own stories. The writing of short fiction is one of the most satisfying and yet one of the most challenging forms of writing. The reading of short stories is also often challenging, but again, affords great rewards, for the short story, is a highly flexible form which can touch the deepest chords in the very heart of the reader, can swiftly illuminate half-known truths, can inscribe on the mind images and thoughts that will never fade. Readers often return again and again to re-read short stories, to re-experience the delight of the first reading, and to discover new moments, new insights that come with time and reflection.

 

WRITING SHORT STORIES

It is probably not fruitful or even possible to theorise before the event, to define a short story without taking examples for analysis. For one thing, writers who set out to write short stories need to read lots of examples of the form. New writers sometimes fall into the error of trying to imagine the ‘form’ of the short story, and then trying to fashion their own work according to this abstract notion. Does a short story have, as is often stated, a ‘beginning, middle and end’? Those terms in themselves are the first stop in the discussion. What is meant by ‘beginning’,  ‘middle’ ‘end’? They are abstractions, and are probably not in fact particularly useful terms in this context. For a short story is generally not a straight-forward and simple narrative that re-tells an anecdote – it may contain anecdotes, but it must first create its own world, its own tone, its own narrative position, and its own moral position, and therein lies the intense pleasure as well as the first difficulty of writing short stories. How does the writer take up and then convey in language alone the narrative voice and tone that will create for the readers the world into which the writer wishes to take them? You can read all sorts of rules and regulations about how to write short stories, but in the end they are often like instructions on how to swim or drive a car – until you get into the water or behind the wheel, you don’t really know what it is going to be like. This analogy quickly loses ground because there are in fact rules to swimming and driving. But swimming and driving are not activities that set out to create in the way that writing sets out to create. When you write you aim to fashion and deliver some kind of picture or idea or feeling or message from your memory and imagination to the imagination of your reader. No matter what you write about, your work will be an entry of some kind into your own ways of looking at the world, via the world you succeed in creating in the story. The writer must have the courage to experiment with language and material in order to bring forward the features of life that have inspired them to write in the first place.

“I wish it were possible to dispel the idea, the myth, firmly ingrained in the minds of many people, that short stories are constructed by following a formula whereby the would-be writer collects some characters and a situation, some themes and a plot, and somehow mixes these together and voilà! a short story is born. The first thing, the very first thing, and, I am sometimes tempted to say, the only thing is the exercise of the curiosity and the imagination. Writing fiction is mostly about letting the human imagination flow and express itself in words and images. When this is done the characters and themes and plots arrive with a kind of joyful effortlessness – requiring also of course time and reflection and a certain amount of re-reading and editing. I guess what I am really saying is that if young writers let their imaginations take over for a while they will find that writing stories is something that can come naturally to them. It is this naturalness that is quite often discouraged by anxious guides and teachers who can sometimes mistakenly put up barriers that don’t need to be there. My suggestion is that young writers be encouraged to write first and that they reflect on their work in the context of the short story in its many shapes and forms after they have written. In other words content and all the rest can come before abstract form, and form can follow. But the first things have to be joy and enthusiasm, a curiosity about life, and a confidence in the use of words.”   Carmel Bird

 

 

(see next page for table and text)

SECTION ONE

 

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KEY Horizontal

 

A  Psychology of human relationships

B  Role and position of women

C  Children and childhood

D  Violence

E  Horror

F  Murder

G  Depression & or Suicide

H  Marriage

I  Adolescence

J  History

K  Art&Photography

L  Death& After Death

M  Fate& Destiny

N  Memory

O  Love&Longing

 

KEY - vertical

1)       Made Glorious Summer

2)        Shooting the Fox

3)       Cave Amantem

4)        A Taste of Earth

5)        Woodpecker Point

6)        A Telephone Call for Genevieve Snow

7)        Major Butler’s Kidneys

8)        The Golden Moment

9)        Goczka

10)      As High as an Elephant’s Eye

11)      The Girl in the Freud Musem

12)      Buff Orpington and the Disasters of Modern Life

13)      The Man in the Red Car

14)        The Right Stuff

15)      Automatic Teller

16)     Kay Petman’s Coloured Pencils

17)      The Hair and the Teeth

18)        Pomona Avenue

19)     Higher Animals

20)       Buttercup and Wendy

21)       The Enlargement of Bethany

22)       One Last Picture of Ruby Rose

23)      Why Breezy McCarthy Drank the Cider

24)       The Horse Might Talk

25)       Now Ida Haunts the Car Park

26)       Ties of Blood

27)       The Affair at the Ritz

28)       Picture of Doreen Grey

29)        Kawasaki 500 

30)       Special Connection

31)       Maytime Fair

32)       Reptile Girl

33)       The Isolation of the Deciding Factor

34)       The Sea is Going to France

35)       The Golden Earring of Hepzibah-May Mull

36)      What World is This

37)     The Woodpecker Toy Fact

38)    The Common Rat

39)    The Cricketers’ Arms

40)    Flick

41)    Red Letters

42)    P.D.Hepworth, Architect

43)    Henry Lawson’s Chromosome

44)    Soldier of the Round Valleys

 

 

 

 

 

SECTION TWO

 

THE STORIES – ANALYSIS AND CREATIVE RESPONSE

 

1    ‘Made Glorious Summer’

Discussion and Analysis

Of all the categories in the table, this story lacks only G which is ‘suicide’. The story is particularly strong and explicit in its examination and development of A, the ‘psychology of human relationships’. C and D -  ‘murder’ and ‘violence’ are also key elements in this story. But perhaps the feature that first strikes the reader is the presence of four different angles of vision, signified and differentiated in the text by the use of different kinds of type. These angles of vision are:

1)       the overall voice of a narrator

2)       the story of the schoolgirls

3)       the text of Shakespeare’s Richard 111

4)       the dialogue of the family where two people are murdered

Without number four would there be a story? The answer has to be ‘no’. One, two and three provide the structure in which four is placed.

How would it be if the story consisted only of number four?

Consider how the different and distinct parts of the story (1,2,3,4) have elements (language, images, characters maybe) in common. What effect does this interweaving have on the whole narrative?

Who would you classify as the main character in the story? Why have you chosen this person?

Can you write a summary of the plot?

What are the themes?

What memories do you think you will carry away from this story?

The schoolgirls do not seem to connect the play with the events unfolding in the street behind the school. This is an example of irony. What are some other examples of irony in this story?

Why do you think the text makes such a point of the scenes of nature around the tree?

How has the text aroused feelings of horror?

The text foregrounds the fact that the school is in Australia , and yet the girls resemble English schoolgirls in their dress. What point do you think the text is making with this observation?

Other stories in the collection that tell of murders withing families are ‘Higher Animals’ and ‘Ties of Blood’. Consider the narrative voice and the point of view of these stories and compare them with ‘Made Glorious Summer’.

 Creative Response

  • Imagine you are one of the schoolgirls. Write a conversation between yourself and your mother about your classes on Richard 111 and your response to them.
  • If you have studied another play that reflects the issues in the story of the son who murders his father and mother, re-write the story infusing your version with elements of that other play.
  • Imagine you are the wife of the murderer and write your diary of the events.
  • Two other stories that take the reader into the lives of schoolgirls are ‘Kay Petman’s Coloured Pencils’ and ‘Why Breezy McCarthy Drank the Cider’. In these stories the focus is on the interior life of a single girl. Imagine that Kay or Breezy is in the class studying Richard 111 and write an interior monologue taking into account the preoccupations of the girl, and the demands of being in the English class.

 

 

 

2             “Reptile Girl”

 

Discussion and Analysis

 

This story is told by a narrator who speaks in a voice resembling that of a teller of tales, such as fairy tales. The movement of the narrative also is traditional, taking a chronological path from the statement of the problem to the sad resolution. It has a rather eerie tone, and falls into the classification of fantasy and speculative fiction. The reader may wonder at times whether these things are possible, but the language is persuasive, in a whispering kind of way, and persuades the reader to suspend any disbelief and to flow with the fairy tale mode of thinking. There is something dark and terrible at the heart of this story, and it is never quite made clear by any statement from the narrator. This is a strange, dark, distant world that yet seems somehow to be part of a hidden world of today.

The narrator sets the tone, and is a kind of fairy tale voice which inspires confidence in the reader. Readers are accustomed to falling in with what this kind of voice tells them. The narrator’s voice is similar to that of the narrator of ‘Automatic Teller’. (There is another connection between these stories, that of an emphasis on skin.)

The time in which the story is set is also a distant, time-less time. How does this fact affect the tone and mood of the story?

Discuss the relationship between the father and daughter in this story.

Snakes in fiction and poetry (at least as far back as the Book of Genesis) are generally signifiers of evil. How is that working in this story?

Do you know any urban myths about a pregnant woman being frightened by a pig, for example?

In the light of the snake in this story, consider the role of the cat in ‘The Isolation of the Deciding Factor’.

What is the significance of the pomegranate tree in literature and art?

Do you know of a myth in which the seeds of the pomegranate are highly significant?

Beginning with ‘On an afernoon in late summer’ and ending with ‘pointing to the nearby green wall’ the story slips into the present tense. What effect does this short insertion of the present have on the story?

The witch knows more than the doctors. How does this relate to the debate between orthodox medicine and alternative medicine?

Other stories in the collection that visit this fairy tale and speculative realm are ‘Cave Amantem’ and ‘Now Ida Haunts the Car Park’ and ‘The Isolation of the Deciding Factor’. And other stories that challenge the reader’s understanding of ‘reality’ are ‘Woodpecker Point’, ‘The Enlargement of Bethany’ and ‘One Last Picture of Ruby Rose’. ‘A Telephone Call For Genevieve Snow’ is another way of examining fairy tale heroines. It is worth reading all these stories as a group in order to enjoy the flavour of this edgy way of looking at the psychology of human nature. These stories showcase the hyper-real vision of the world. There is something about them that might just be true, or might just be about to happen, and the matter-of-fact tone of the telling highlights this element of the writing.

 

Creative Response

  • Imagine you are the nine year-old Samsara and write your account of you life.
  • Imagine you are a miracle worker who comes to cure Samsara. Tell the story from your point of view. Will you give the story a happy ending? How will you structure the story? Will you begin by telling the reader that Samsara is cured and then go back and give the history of the case? You might like to write it up as a ‘case’ in your casebook.
  • Tell the story from the point of view of the snake.
  • The father knew how to nourish his daughter’s spirit with ‘all that is beautiful and good’. Write an account of the time at the house on the hill to which they finally retired, including in your account details of the ‘beautiful and good’.
  • Taking this story and two others of your choice from the collection, write an essay in which you examine the ‘beautfiul and good’ and the ‘ugly and evil’ in these texts. 

 

3         ‘A Telephone Call For Genevieve Snow’

Discussion and Analysis

This is perhaps the most horrifying story in the collection. It features one of the greatest taboos – cannibalism. That this cannibalism takes place on the outskirts of a large modern Australian city makes the event perhaps even more awful for the reader. The narrative tone is that of a kind of calm third person. One of the principal characters is ‘the Voice’ that comes over the public address system at the school. This Voice is responsible for setting the tradegy in motion. It is also responsible for the humour in the story, when it gives out the details of the children’s lives for all the world to hear. Fate is a big player in this story, the killer passing the school at the critical moment.

The telephone is a key player in this story. It is also very significant in ‘The Man in the Red Car’. What is the other strong motif that these quite different stories have in common?

The Voice in this story is perhaps reminiscent of the voice in the automatic teller machine in ‘Automatic Teller’, but the purposes of the two voices differ. How do they differ? 

Explain how the Voice is a sinister element in the narrative.

One of the key ideas in this story is that of rape. This idea is also important in ‘The Hair and the Teeth’, although in a more subtle way.
Consider the meaning of the little doll at the end of ‘The Hair and the Teeth’.
How does the doll, in the context of the narrative, bring the notion of rape to the reader’s consciousness?

 

Creative Response

  • Write a conversation between two of the children whose teacher, Miss Snow, has disappeared.
  • Take the role of the Voice and invent some more information to be delivered over the public address.
  • Imagine you are making a film of this story. For the set designer, write instructions for the interior of Nigel’s cabin in the woods.
  • Imagine Genevieve escapes and tells her story to the media. Write up one of her TV interviews, maybe on Oprah.
  • Imagine you are the insurance woman in ‘The Hair and the Teeth’. Write your report of the visit to the victim’s house.

 

4    ‘The Golden Moment’

Discussion and Analysis

This story is revealed through the thoughts and conversations of two women who are neighbours in an affluent neighbourhood. There is a strong element of irony running through the text.
Why is the title ironic?

Who is made to appear more guilty? How is that done?

Why are the women given the names of their houses?

What is the effect of the mention of Indigenous people, Jewish people, Catholic people in this context?

It is a story where rumour is one of the main motifs, and rumour can be very damaging. Do you know of a rumour that caused a lot of trouble?

Advances in medical technology are showcased in this story, and also in ‘The Isolation of the Deciding Factor’. In each story the reference is comic and yet profoundly sinister. How is this effect achieved in both stories?

Medical matters also surface in ‘Major Butler’s Kidney’s’.
Again it is a specific part of the human body that is the focus.
Consider these three stories together from the aspect of their view of body parts.

Fairy tales sometimes focus on characters who have lost part of their body, such as their fingers.
Find one of these stories and explore its relationship to ‘The Golden Moment’.

War is a key factor in the story. ‘Goczka’ is also a war narrative, but is a monologue from a child refugee.

How do the different points of view of these two stories affect your understanding of the effects of war?

Consider the role of fate and coincidence in this story.

What are the role and significance of the white cat and the black dog?

Consider other stories in the collection where photography is a strong motif, for example ‘The Enlargement of Bethany’, ‘One Last Picture of Ruby Rose’ and ‘Woodpecker Point’, and discuss the apparent importance of photography in the writer’s work.

Then consider the importance of paintings and drawings in the stories.

What moods infuse this story?

 

Creative Response

  • Imagine you are Aurora and write the story of your life so far. How do you feel about becoming a nun?
  • Imagine you are Mrs Blackwood and write your account of the life of Aurora , including the visit to Lourdes .
  • If you were making a film of this story, what pieces of music would you use, and what other sounds would you put on the soundtrack?

 

 

5     Woodpecker Point’

Analysis and Discussion

This story is told in interior monologues and letters and so it takes the reader inside the minds of the various characters whose accounts of events frequently conflict, giving rise to moments of irony and shock. It is set in an imaginary rural town on the north west coast of Tasmania . One clue to the fact that this town in imaginary is the solemn reference to the Tasmanian woodpecker. Australia has no native woodpeckers. Much of the narrative concentrates on the death of Muriel’s father, and follows the ripple effect of this event back and forth in time, and across the lives, loves and deaths of other members of the family and of the community. The prose is often lyrical and poetic, adding a musical dimension to the images in the minds of the  characters. There is an obsessivness bordering on pathology in the mind of Muriel – she is one of the most tragic figures in the collection. Her dedicated and apparently loveless life forms the backbone of the whole narrative. Her story is the medium for the revelation of the life of Mrs Morning Glory who really is a figure of madness. Madness can be found in several other stories in the collection, for instance in ‘One Last Picture of Ruby Rose’ (or is it madness after all?), in ‘The Sea is Going to France ’ and in ‘ Pomona Avenue ’ where the mother suffers from obsessive compulsive disorder.

 The motifs of the well and of the red rug move through the narrative as constant and poignant reminders of love and death. Collect references to the well and the red rug, and trace their progress through the lives of the characters.

What is the significance of the red windmill?

The two Great Wars of the twentieth century have a profound effect on the lives of the people in this story. So much of what is said about those wars is coming from the sad memories of the characters. What effect does the geographical distance of Woodpecker Point from the action of those wars have on the tone of the war narrative?

Life after death is a mirror image of life on earth.
Comment on this concept. Do you find it amusing or alarming?

 

Creative Response

  • Write a conversation in which Iris relates to a friend in Portugal the events that have been happening at Woodpecker Point in her absence.
  • Imagine you are Father and write some more letters from the Other Side.
  • Give the vicar’s account of the events.
  • Prepare a radio reading of selected parts of the story. Include music and sound effects.
  • Imagine you are a modern tourist visiting Woodpecker Point, and write your travel diary.

 

 

 

6         ‘The Man in the Red Car’

Discussion and Analysis

Discuss the character of Miss Moss and her role in the events that lead to Brian’s death.

Brian is having a mid-life crisis. Compare his experiences with those of  X  in ‘Buff Orpington and the Disasters of Middle Life’.

Brian and X from ‘Buff Orpington’ and Y from ‘The Right Stuff’ are all the victims of straying wives. Unfaithfulness in marriage is a common motif which can be comic, dramatic or sad. Discuss how all three modes can be found in these stories.

Look at the way infidelity is signalled in ‘The Cricketers’ Arms’ and ‘The Picture of Doreen Gray’. In these stories infidelity is made comic. What are the text’s strategies for creating this comic tone?

The story ‘The Common Rat’ also discusses the ending of a love relationship. Look at how the ‘five year’ limit is introduced by the Psychology tutor, in preparation for the way it comes in at the end of the story.

 

Creative Response

 

o        Write some more dialogue for Melody and Tom.

o        The phone is a key element in this and in several of the stories. Discuss the role of the phone in the plots of at least three stories.

o        It is ten years later – give Melody’s account of the car accident in which her father was killed.

o        Give Melody’s grandmother’s account of the breakdown of the marriage of Melody’s parents.

7         ‘Automatic Teller’

Discussion and Analysis

A number of the stories foreground events and matters of world significance, bringing these into the lives of the characters. In the light of this statement, consider, alongside the first part of ‘Automatic Teller’, the stories ‘Flick’, ‘Oklahoma’, ‘The Golden Moment’, ‘Goczka’ and ‘What World is This?’

This is another story of marital infidelity, but here there is also the strange fidelity to Wendy-Ellen. Comment on the character of Alexamder in the light of this duality.

Modern technology gives the opportunity for this story to mock, and the story also plays with the work ‘tell’. Is this an optimistic story?

Creative Response

  • Write one of the other stories that the automatic teller might tell.
  • You are one of Alexander’s children. Write the story of your father’s will and the aftermath.
  • Now you are Wendy-Ellen. Give your account of your love affair with Alexander.

 

 

 

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